TASK 3 PENERJEMAHAN BERBANTUAN KOMPUTER

TASK 3 - COMPUTER-ASSISTED TRANSLATION

Class of 4SA03

Group Member:

1.    Ananda Meidiana P.  (10615647)

2.    Nada Afifah M.      (14615897) 

3.    Prima Ayu Mutiara H.  (15615392)

4.    Valerie Shania A.  (17615702) 

     

Translation Techniques by Molina & Albir (2002)

No	Source Text	Google Translate	Target Text	Strategy
1.	Inside the cocoon a change is shape (or metamorphosis) takes place.	Di dalam kepompong terjadi perubahan bentuk (atau metamorphosis).	Di dalam kepompong terjadi perubahan bentuk (metamorfosis).	Borrowing, Substitution.
2.	Eventually a butterfly emerges from the cocoon.	Akhirnya kupu-kupu muncul dari kepompong.	Pada tahap akhir, kupukupu muncul dari kepompong.	Established Equivalent.
3.	Early people were so impressed by this that they compared the human soul to the butterfly.	Orang-orang awal begitu terkesan dengan hal ini sehingga mereka membandingkan jiwa manusia dengan kupukupu.	Orang zaman dahulu sangat terkesan dengan hal ini sehingga mereka membandingkan antara jiwa manusia dengan kupu-kupu.	Adaptation.
4.	The soul is confined to an ugly human body like the caterpillar.	Jiwa terbatas pada tubuh manusia yang buruk seperti ulat.	Jiwa dibatasi pada tubuh manusia yang buruk layaknya ulat.	Amplification.

5.	Death is like the cocoon from which the soul or butterfly escapes to live forever.	Kematian adalah seperti kepompong tempat jiwa atau kupu-kupu lolos untuk hidup selamanya.	Kematian itu ibarat kepompong yang jiwanya hilang dan berubah untuk hidup selamanya menjadi kupu-kupu.	Amplification, Established Equivalent.
6.	Not all insects have such different and sudden changes as from caterpillar to butterfly.	Tidak semua serangga memiliki perubahan yang berbeda dan tiba-tiba seperti dari ulat ke kupukupu.	Tidak semua serangga memiliki perbedaan seperti itu yang secara tiba-tiba berubah bentuk (bermetamorfosis) seperti ulat menjadi kupu-kupu.	Amplification.
7.	Grasshoppers changes gradually.	Belalang berubah secara bertahap.	Belalang mengalami perubahan bentuk secara bertahap.	Generalization.
8.	The early stages of the grasshopper look more like the later stages of the grasshopper than caterpillars look like butterflies.	Tahap awal belalang lebih mirip tahap belalang kemudian daripada ulat yang terlihat seperti kupukupu.	Tahapan awal belalang lebih mirip dengan tahapan belalang selanjutnya dari pada ulat yang seperti kupu kupu.	Reduction.
9.	This is called gradual metamorphosis.	Ini disebut metamorfosis bertahap.	Ini disebut metamorfosis bertahap.	Borrowing.
10.	Not all animals exhibiting polymorphism are invertebrates.	Tidak semua hewan yang menunjukkan polimorfisme adalah invertebrata.	Tidak semua binatang menunjukan polimorfisme adalah invertebrata.	Borrowing.
11.	Frogs are vertebrates and they hatch from eggs as animals called tadpoles	Katak adalah vertebrata dan mereka menetas dari telur sebagai binatang yang disebut berudu.	Katak adalah hewan yang bertulang belakang dan mereka menetas dari telur sebagai binatang yang disebut berudu.	Borrowing.
12.	Tadpoles have no legs and look somewhat like	Berudu tidak memiliki kaki dan terlihat seperti	Berudu tidak mempunyai kaki dan seperti ikan.	Borrowing.
	fish.	ikan.
13.	Eventually, the tadpoles grow legs and become frogs.	Akhirnya, berudu menumbuhkan kaki dan menjadi katak.	Lalu berudu bertumhuh kakinya dan berubah menjadi katak.	Description.

Analysis:

1.     This sentence uses Borrowing Translation Technique according to ‘metamorphosis’ as a SL to ‘metamorfosis’ as a TL. Also uses Substitution Translatuon Technique according to ‘takes place’ as a SL to ‘terjadi’ as a TL in order to make sentence to be easy to understand.

2.     This sentence uses Established Equivalent Translation Technique according to

‘eventually’ is not translated as ‘akhirnya’ because it doesn’t sound fit to TL, so it must be ‘pada tahap akhir’ because the context tells about a process of something.

3.     This sentence uses Adaptation Translation Technique because according to ‘early people’ as a SL is not translated as ‘orang-orang awal’ it will sound wrong and too literal. It should be ‘orang zaman dahulu’ so that it will sound accurate to TL uses cultural meaning (Bahasa Indonesia)

4.     This sentence uses Amplification Translation Technique because according to ‘like’ word from SL is not translated as ‘seperti’ because it will sound common, to make it sounds fit it should be ‘layaknya’.

5.     This sentence uses Amplification Technique, because it is paraphrased, so the meaning is easily accepted in TL. A few words are added, so that the meaning becomes clearer in TL. There is an addition of the word “yang”.

And also Established Equivalent Technique in word “lolos” which translated into “hilang”, it is more commonly used, so that the translation is more acceptable.

6.     There is a meaning that must be clarified, so that this sentence uses Amplification

Technique, by adding an explanation in parentheses “(berfotosintesis)”.

7.     This sentence uses Generalization Technique. This translation uses a general word. And

Amplification Technique by adding the word “mengalami” and “bentuk”, so that it is clearer.

8.     Reduction is a technique that reduces certain elements of the SL. From SL there are ‘of‘ to discribe “the early stages of the grasshopper“ and “the later stages of the grasshopper”, but for the TL the words ‘of‘ is unnecessarly.

9.     Borrowing is a technique that takes a word or expression straight from another language.

The word ‘metamorphosis’ takes from another language which is about a biological process by animal and in TL metamorphosis also translated into metamorfosis which is has same meaning.

10.  Borrowing is a technique that takes a word or expression straight from another language.

The word ‘polimorfisme’ and ‘invertebrates’ takes from another language. In TL polymorphism and inverbrates also translated into polimorfisme and invertebrata which are have same meaning.

11.  This sentence uses Borrowing Technique because there’s a word without changing its original name from SL to TL.

12.  This sentence uses Borrowing Technique because there’s a word without changing its original name from SL to TL.

13.  This sentence uses Description Technique because when it transforms into a specific Bahasa Indonesia, it adds up some words, so that the words will be stood up completely and easy to understand.